Getting serious about this song writing thing...sort of

Okay. I once upon a time said that this blog was meant for anything and everything that I wanted and needed for any given moment. So, I decided to post a song that I wrote earlier this month. Please be honest, and comment on what needs work. I am all about improvement and positive criticism. Personally, this song could go on forever for me. The title may need work, but hey...it's a start. Hopefully within the next month or so, I work with Garage Band to make a recording with my geetar (holy crap I know...)

Nightmares Shaped in Dreams

There was a boy named Pride.
He never knew how to stay satisfied.
He walks down the street like he owns the place.
But he doesn’t know the man who wears his face.

But then the devil. Came to town.
Made an offer. That nowhere else could be found.
And he said. If you come with me,
I’ll can give you the world. Just wait and see.

Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of who you wish you could be.
Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of nightmares shaped in dreams.

There was a girl named Suicide.
She never knew how to save her life.
She couldn’t take the way she looked every day.
But she didn’t know she was beautiful in every way.

But then the devil. Walked across the room.
At the party. Where there was no one she knew.
And he whispered. If you come with me.
I can make you. The body of a goddess no god’s ever seen.

Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of who you wish you could be.
Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of nightmares shaped in dreams.

Now you see Pride. Had wanted the world.
But found that there was nothing of worth.
He wanted to prove. To himself.
That he had everything but he had nothing at all.

And now Suicide. She became a star.
But everyone seemed to love her from afar.
And she forgot. What it was like to love.
And how loving from the inside out was what it’s all about.

Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of who you wish you could be.
Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of nightmares shaped in dreams.

Give you dreams. Give me your fantasies.
I can make them come true. Just sell your soul out over to me.
Be careful of the devil. Dressed in white with the soft red eyes

Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of who you wish you could be.
Be careful what you wish for. Be careful of nightmares shaped in dreams.
Just be careful babe. Of Nightmares shaped in dreams.

Again, you can't have growth without honesty...