So I just got word from big sister....and she LIKES THE SONG!!!!! While I shared the song with a select few, her opinion mattered most to me....cause she would actually tell me what I need to work on. I was so nervous about her listening to it that I didn't call her like I usually do (meaning it was serious). She even said that she forgot that it was me singing sometimes.
Thus far....some feedback has been the following:
-Word Choice (which definitely needs to change cause well...I was making the song up while I was playing-therefore, I will write it down the first chance I get)
- Adding a bridge and adjusting the tempo at some parts,
-The fact that you can hear me change chords (which I personally like in acoustic songs. I think it gives it surprising character)
I was playing around with GarageBand, and am in love. It's fantastic all the things you can do with it, like add ambient noises in the background. If I wasn't writing this research paper, all I would be doing is working on this and other songs.
I will be putting up a better version on my GoogleSite hopefully by the weekend!!!! Yay for practice!!!!!
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